Month: September 2014
Scissor words are overused words which can be eliminated. Here are some helpful tips:
1. “To be” verbs: is, are, am, was, were, be, being, been.
Try reworking your sentences, and cut back on using them. You cannot wholly avoid “to be” verbs, but limit their usage.
2. “That” can be overused within a sentence. Take out some in your story; it may make the sentences flow better.
3. Just, like, & as are used for emphasis or comparison. But, they can turn into writing crutches.
4. “ly” adverbs are lackluster descriptive words. Even though there are some situations you cannot avoid using adverbs. Do not go overboard. Using “ly” adverbs too much will weaken the story. Use other descriptive words to strengthen it.
5. Now means: NOW. It’s an immediate response. If you choose to use it, avoid placing now at the beginning of the sentence.
Now we can go.
We can go now.